Comments by All Members
- "This really struck me...I can't quite place why...it's in the stringing together of a few basic words that somehow twist at my heart. Well written"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Real and Unreal" by Stranger
- "I will confess I had to read it twice to understand but now that I do I have to agree with White City Willows that the last part really ties it together in an unexpected way.Brilliant poem."
Posted by Dark Unicorn on "One of Us..." by Stranger
- "I feel like this could also be two people who know each other well, but view their paths separating... losing each other... this being their last attempt at finding each other again. Very enjoyable read."
Posted by BloodyMercy on "An Unintentional Kindness " by Stranger
- "Impressively subtle. Although the loss of what was once perfect love is tragically spoken - the sudden quick-silver knife blade slice of the loss of a child slashes through the mind so quickly, the shock barely registers till 3 seconds later.
Very effective write!
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Posted by Leineco on "Sentence" by Stranger
- "Awesome work. I love the last two lines the most. Keep it up!"
Posted by Unknown on "Woman" by Stranger
- "I've read it today a total of 13 times and this comment is apt to how I feel. Just letting you know... I read it. Sound foolish anyway."
Posted by Lux on "An Unintentional Kindness " by Stranger
- "This reads so...simply...for lack of a better word...and I mean no disrespect...because I have come back several times...wondering...how did he do that?Golden write."
Posted by Honey on "An Unintentional Kindness " by Stranger
- "this is sumptious... dark unbridled lust.. made me whimper and ache for it. i was left begging for more. deliciously decadent."
Posted by Unknown on "Perfect Slave" by Stranger
- "So you're alive too! :)
This was a lovely treat tonight. Something about the way you write, whatever you write . . . of all the things I've changed my mind about over the years, your poetry is an unchanging source of pleasure. It's almost a litmus test of how human I remain - will it still move me? - and lo, I'm still human. Thanks for that :)"
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "The Sky is Broken" by Stranger
- "wow. you grab the readers attention and hold them there while you paint a picture around them in vivid color. enchanting."
Posted by Unknown on "The Magician" by Stranger
- "Epic is the word hear... Definitely a twisted spiraling take on the missionary position...you take us among a wide horizon..a grand scene set upon the waters...the words speak oceans..it was sensual and smart..thanks "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
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