Comments by All Members
- "This was pretty freaking funny. The first line completely took me by surprised, and the rest of the poem kept me chuckling."
Posted by Unknown on "My Fetish" by Saschwann
- "I can't imagine anything worse than this. God, I hope this didn't really happen. Your amazingly talented, and no on deserves to be treated like that. !_!"
Posted by Unknown on "Break Me" by Saschwann
- "sasch, this is really heartbreaking. ptown in starting to ware on you. i loved this poem, the way it ended was brilliant. your word choice was great. honest, witty, beautiful."
Posted by spaniellie on "A Walk" by Saschwann
- "Interesting, I especially found the thought intriguing "Why must (snow) fall? Fall down to where it is hated..." Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Unfold" by Saschwann
- "This is absolutely wonderful, like slowly unwrapping a gift. Precious."
Posted by Unknown on "Unfold" by Saschwann
- "touching. word choice was awome, the last four lines really stood out. but i have to ask if this is symbolisim?"
Posted by spaniellie on "This Day" by Saschwann
- "this is tricky word usage but i have an inkling of what your big heart is crying... great write, i loved the flow of the 1st 2 stanzas and the way the 3rd left me hanging."
Posted by spaniellie on "Spring Break" by Saschwann
- "awww the school nights in a little mountain town. i wish i was there... "i got five on it!" after living in the moment after so long you forget there is a future and past ey?"
Posted by spaniellie on "Rum" by Saschwann
- "i love this. it was a whole other side of you. completely breath taking really. you are amazing."
Posted by spaniellie on "No Borders" by Saschwann
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