Spring Break

By Saschwann

Liquid weightless warmth across my skin
Chemicals burn my nose and the funs begin
Shy conversation and self conscience laughter
One frozen moment, Every thing happens after

The cold wind blows a puff of powder tingling on my cheeks
And the banter goes on, the door swingin as it creeks
A new warmth suddenly caresses my skin
But this, also, too quickly comes to it's end

A hollow feling encompasses my body
As my eyes grow wet my vision becomes dotty
Hand to hand the warmth slowly slides down my finger
But hopeless thoughts of love and pleasure in my mind still linger

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Copyright 2005 Saschwann
Published on Tuesday, September 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • spaniellie On Thursday, December 29, 2005, spaniellie (76)By person wrote:

    this is tricky word usage but i have an inkling of what your big heart is crying... great write, i loved the flow of the 1st 2 stanzas and the way the 3rd left me hanging.

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