Comments by All Members
- "Lament for a lost love, and hoping he knows the score and appreciates the gift you give. Lucky guy or unlucky you? (hope not) - cheers! "
Posted by dwells on "I Blame You!!!!" by RubyXero
- "I love this RubyXero, lost in a mystical untold legend but still so very relevant to the close ties you find in your heart and wish to share"
Posted by DePriest on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
- "Hm, Ruby, intensively written!
W/ many emotions ... which jump me towards ... directly in my face ... if I am not careful.
The last 5 years?! Well, I think to know who you mean ... if it so, does it show many more explorations of your personal being & life ... if I have not completely lost my belly feeling ... my mind & sanity ... is it for me pretty clear who to blame is.
I like your power, your feminine energy ... also w/ in your poetic words & lines ... but this I have written to you so many times ... even though I probably can not to often enough these statements might write ... & I want it not often enough writing ...
Your female expression impresses me! Again & again ...
I will read more ... of you ... soon."
Posted by metaphormachine on "I Blame You!!!!" by RubyXero
- "A flowing story ... created as a poem ... I like the parts with the dialoges, the conversation ... in a poem ... in the verses ... good idea! More of her ... soon ... :)
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Posted by metaphormachine on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
- "beautiful write ms Ruby.....had me retracing a few steps mentally...thanks for the visuals and the wonder."
Posted by natalie on "Windermere Dreams" by RubyXero
- "I am so mad I dont have any to room to bookmark this! God this piece has such a signature way about it that I can't explain. So, spiritual, so timeless. Like this could have been discovered on tapestries long long ago. An ancient wisdom so close to home. Your writing has evolved and transformed. Your wisdom paints as it breathes.... "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
- "People get older and bruised by life, buried underneath responsibilities, and nothing stays the same for very long. May you recapture those good times again, if only for a moment or two, cheers! This piece was dripping with melancholia, well done."
Posted by dwells on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
- "very expressive piece! the sibling bond is never really broken , merely stretched a bit by change. remember the great things you had together and bear her no malice...love her in spite of the changes she must now endure and you try to stay strong.
thanks for sharing this piece of your heart."
Posted by natalie on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
- "very nice ruby and very heartfelt. i can feel your passion in this. your words speak very highly of your sister and i do sense this longing you have to have it back to the way it was. maybe someday you will. i would say take what you can get and remember that blood is thicker than water. i wish the best for you. very good write ruby...i loved it!"
Posted by haunted on "The Solitary Climb" by RubyXero
- "ruby you sound completely torn to peices. in this poem you have let him tear you down and sounds like you are a slave for anything he offers you when it may not even be given or offered. you almost sound like the victim. its a great poem and i love to hear it when people honestly write about themselves. thank you for sharing and you need to get your heart back and learn from this. then you'll be saying....i blame myself. awesome ruby! stay strong."
Posted by haunted on "I Blame You!!!!" by RubyXero
- "Feed your desire but guard your emotions, since you already know the words to this same old song, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Screaming Melody" by RubyXero
- "Being played is not easy when you hold emotions for the musician that are not returned. If you can steel yourself and protect your heart, why not enjoy a remake of an old favorite tune... - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Screaming Melody" by RubyXero
- "Dr. Grim. Genius! All the poem is superb, I perceived it as this being addressed to Death, Grim Reaper. It was how I perceived it and I enjoyed it. It's a new concept of talking about Death. Really well conceived."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Screaming Melody" by RubyXero
- "hey ruby! how goes it...i loved your metaphore in this. its very clever and your imagination really paid off in this one. this poem is awesome! for some ruby alot of women are cellos and when they tune you up...just tune them out! otherwise they will always play you...fantastic poem! loved it....good seeing you again!"
Posted by haunted on "Screaming Melody" by RubyXero
- "I cannot agree more with this, so wonderfully written, it made me feel special even though you do not know me, even if you have read none of my poems. This site is like a club to share our secrets, makes me feel... I don't know the word, but something :) "
Posted by RibbonHeart on "For Every Single Poet" by RubyXero
- "The resilience of childhood..... the forgiveness of childhood..... how I sometimes wish that they carried over into our adult lives.... you made me feel it with your work above though. Not sure if that was the point but its power took me there."
Posted by Unknown on "Zombie Queen" by RubyXero
- "Wow! This is a beautiful piece, had me gripped. I loved the beginning, like evolution of man then becoming something much more personal, truly wonderful. Sorry for your loss x"
Posted by RibbonHeart on "Tear Stained Smiles" by RubyXero
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