Comments by All Members
- "wow. i cant believe i didnt see this earlier. this is so helpless but powerful at the same time. i always love your work. youve amazed me again. xoxo"
Posted by Sinnocence on "Dead to You" by Midnight Phoenix
- "you ass... you had to go and pull the emotions that I try to bury right to the surface. man, I hate this feeling... I always get walked on. Great write... :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Dead to You" by Midnight Phoenix
- "so well written, like always. i can relate all to well with the feelings in this poem. it's making me think too much...wow-Siva"
Posted by Unknown on "Dead to You" by Midnight Phoenix
- "Hmm well stated and something very relatable. "smile and take what you need" I know this feeling, the lack of care after getting used to being used. Very well written. ~Urban Shipwreck~"
Posted by Unknown on "Dead to You" by Midnight Phoenix
- "I can find myself thinking those thoughts and tasting those words in these past days...."burn my body
and scatter my ashes into the wind"...you almost maked me teary...don't dissapear though..we want you here. "
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "Dead to You" by Midnight Phoenix
- "that was such a corny comment. but i do belive you can take your work much further...you could sell it. but then again, i think a true writer stays underground. i dont think you need to prove anything to anyone.
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Posted by Twilight on "Forever and Ever" by Midnight Phoenix
- "this is truly emotional. i can feel the pain in your words. whatever it is that brings you saddness is enabling you to write some great stuff. but i do hope you feel better."
Posted by Twilight on "Shattered" by Midnight Phoenix
- ""If I could scream
Would it defend me" for some reason we all believe that screamingf has some sort of defensive power when were hurt of scared. well put i never thought of it that way. "
Posted by Twilight on "Self Defense Mechanism" by Midnight Phoenix
- "the way you write is so different. you are definitely progressing. and i think its awesome. i fyou tried i think your stuff could be published."
Posted by Twilight on "Silver Spyder" by Midnight Phoenix
- "I had to read this poem a few times before I could take something from it. To me it's about not feeling appreciated, wishing someone would take notice without you revealing your desire to want it. I may be off but this piece definitely made me think. G"
Posted by sole on "The Wishing Well" by Midnight Phoenix
- "just a thought... isn't little nemo supposed to be scared of girls? or atleast not like them like that, well unless she's giving you candy, in that case she's a keeper for sure!"
Posted by frost bite on "The Wishing Well" by Midnight Phoenix
- "I hade to read this agian, and the conclusion i came up with is that this is about shame for doing something you liked, i could be wrong cuz im not the brightest of fellows you ever met.~~~Grave"
Posted by WinterGrave on "The Wishing Well" by Midnight Phoenix
- "personaly, i do not believe in god, if he was anything like the bible and other people tell me then we would not be living in this shit hole of a world we live in, i believe we make our own paths by the desisions we make everyday. "
Posted by WinterGrave on "Even God is Crying for Me" by Midnight Phoenix
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