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Silver Spyder
By Midnight Phoenix
Under the man-made stars
Her silhouette left silver dust
As she danced so quickly,
Her waltz so feline
I marked her as mine,
And she marked all
She treaded upon
The city air could not touch us,
Yet it blew light kisses
In hopes of being noticed
We found release in 137MPH runs
With no ceiling to hide under
Passing pairs of red eyed demons
That could only blink in astonishment
We spun our web through the streets
And called them our home
The night was ours to own
The city under an Eclipse.
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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Saturday, October 25, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Silver Spyder"
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On Monday, December 8, 2003, Recycled
(94)
wrote:
"That could only blink in astonishment" "We spun our web through the streets" These were great lines. The entire piece was a pleasure to read.
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A former member wrote:
So enchanting...ugh, you're making me think too much, such a unique style and done so well, brain freeze...amazing-Siva
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A former member wrote:
enchanting beyond description... loved the comparison.
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On Monday, October 27, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Beautiful! You've unloaded the full enchantment of that very city night onto paper. I love the way you describe everything in...such elaborate style. It gives this an absolutely rich and full feelings. Wonderful~JMDW~
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On Monday, October 27, 2003, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
thanks for the ride.
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
"We spun our web through the streets And called them our home"...you made of this write a warm and blissful experience....you can always put beauty into words.
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
I love this work of yours nemo,..it is a bit darker and surely deeper in erotic undertones than usual...like a rare fine wine..I supped...and thoroughly enjoyed...great job!
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Utter beauty dripped from your soul to stain the page with these words, ~ mw
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On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
That is some kind of beauty. I agree with miseria your work is truely amazing.
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On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Sinnocence
(49) wrote:
i always loved the way you piece words together. the "flow" in your works is amazing. this one left me with a mental image of such beauty i cannot desribe it! great job!
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A former member wrote:
youre a natural! like the movie "The Natural" with Robert Redford. the one about baseball. HI YO!
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