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Dead to You
By Midnight Phoenix
look into these eyes
feel their sincerity
and take for granite all that is me
don’t think it hurts
waiting, worrying, wishing
use me like a toy
pleasure and pride
kiss my body and hate me inside
my soul waits for
loving, listening, learning
thoughts burn my insides
knives in my heart
smile and take what you need
while I lie
thinking, screaming, dying
just carry me away
burn my body
and scatter my ashes into the wind
after all, I'm dead to you
meaningless, hopeless, worthless
I disappear...
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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Wednesday, November 19, 2003.
Filed under:
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On Thursday, December 18, 2003, unusual_blood
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wrote:
wow. love the way in which you wrote this. very very nice. this poem was direct and straight foward, yet full of emotions and meaning. well done.
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Mischevious Princess
(28) wrote:
beautiful write...I like your style. This poem is exactly what i'm feeling right now for this guy! I know these feelings well, for it is how I feel pretty much all the damn time. very good nemo **claps hands** ~Draven~
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On Thursday, November 20, 2003, Delilah
(113) wrote:
*sigh*...I know these feelings well...and I hate them...good write...~Delilah~
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On Thursday, November 20, 2003, Sinnocence
(49) wrote:
wow. i cant believe i didnt see this earlier. this is so helpless but powerful at the same time. i always love your work. youve amazed me again. xoxo
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On Thursday, November 20, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
you ass... you had to go and pull the emotions that I try to bury right to the surface. man, I hate this feeling... I always get walked on. Great write... :::OLd
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A former member wrote:
so well written, like always. i can relate all to well with the feelings in this poem. it's making me think too much...wow-Siva
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A former member wrote:
Hmm well stated and something very relatable. "smile and take what you need" I know this feeling, the lack of care after getting used to being used. Very well written. ~Urban Shipwreck~
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On Thursday, November 20, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I can find myself thinking those thoughts and tasting those words in these past days...."burn my body and scatter my ashes into the wind"...you almost maked me teary...don't dissapear though..we want you here.
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A former member wrote:
Yeah...I feel this. I...don't even know the words to say to express my thoughts...
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