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Forever and Ever
By Midnight Phoenix
Sweating sadness
Earthquake shivers
Purging from thoughts of infinity
Crying screams
Helpless distractions
What happens to all of the meanings?
We crept from the shadows of nothing
To taste the sweetest offering
To only find that we will lose it all in the end
My heart aches at the simplicity
My stomach turns wild with anger
I’m so alone, but it only gets worse
What really matters to us?
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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Thursday, September 4, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I know how you feel
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A former member wrote:
I love the end. it brings it together well.
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On Thursday, September 11, 2003, manywalks
(750)
wrote:
Perhaps when we can answer that we can finally move on to the next trek of the journey our souls take. ~ mw
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
You can always make my heart skip a beat....this has really inspired me to think beyond of what really matters...beautiful write!
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
descriptive sadness... questioning our own self worth... hands down, this one is a "9"... excellent!
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
Great freakin' job. I really enjoyed reading this.
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
your quandry of the intangible is what i find that i like of your prose, a simple but articulate and far reaching quandry, bravo my friend ........urban
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
that perhaps is what our lifetimes are for, perhaps when we reach our end that is when we will know? -kryz
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Sinnocence
(49) wrote:
wow, this gave me a feeling of real insignificance. that might not have been the intention but any piece that gives me a feeling is good :)
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
there is a question i wish to know the answer to and at the same time i dont for so many reasons. great write
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