For Malice

By Midnight Phoenix

I know of a place where the ghosts wear white masks and
The halls where they walk are all covered in glass
The wind whispers death every time she walks past
With her charcoal black hair and her skin made of wax

I came upon her abode on a mid-winter's night when
The cold was much colder than I would have liked
She invited me in with a smile so delightful
It melted my heart, much like wax on a bright candle

Shadows were dancing against walls of ebony
Her voice so like song that each word held a melody
Turning around, she then held out her hand to me
I knew she had something she wished me to see

She placed her lips on my neck and I felt a slight pain
She whispered to me "You'll never know sunlight again"

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Copyright 2003 little nemo
Published on Tuesday, April 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Frater Synth On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, Frater Synth (66)By person wrote:

    awasome witeing style i love it considering my writeing style is vary simelir. and what makes it even better is the whole vampire thing at the end

  • stormtalk On Sunday, August 22, 2004, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    Very nice rhyme and flow, and it kept me reading intently to see what it was that you would see... the structure is interesting... almost like a sonnet, but not as stoic. Good job.

  • A former member wrote: ghastly one... the first verse was full of some strange beauty. good one. //ae

  • nesbia On Thursday, July 8, 2004, nesbia (15)By person wrote:

    good read *~kali~*

  • A former member wrote: It's amazing how you continue to captivate me with just words, keep it up-Siva

  • A former member wrote: i'm never going to get over how beautiful your works are!

  • Forever Cold On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, Forever Cold (33)By person wrote:

    i loveed the rymeing in this piece, fabulously done...

  • A former member wrote: hmmm...ponders to herself::great write!

  • CharlottesWeb On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    OOOO!!!! I love this one!! I'm not into the whole VP scene...but this is beauty! I can't beleive you haven't received more comments on this! Your writting reads of expereince. Again...wonderful, wonderful work.~DW~

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