Comments by All Members
- "This was a fantastic poem, showing your friend what you feel towards them. I have almost no criticisms, except for a question: was the first paragraph supposed to rhyme? If so, it would have been better to keep running; but the poem was amazing anyway."
Posted by harlequinn on "True Friend" by l mo
- "Sometimes the pointless things in life make it worth living, at least. Good for suspense? I don't know, I'm trying to find the reason behind me liking this. "
Posted by Unknown on "I wish..." by l mo
- "Normally I dislike writes speaking of selfmutalation but I am not one to tlk for it would make me a hypocrite. I've been there, scarred that. This write speaks loud and clear. It says im hear.
This is very beautiful. Don't ever stop writting."
Posted by ArcticWolf999 on "Unnoticeable" by l mo
- "this is a very well formed eye as far as the aesthetic beauty of it. thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "The Eye" by l mo
- "i never coould help but to doodle with graph paper ..... the eye of the elephant hotpants, is what i gathered from the other comments, i guess ...... but to me , it looks like a snake eye ..... thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "The Product Of My Boredom..." by l mo
- "Welcome to my world, I grew up as a pagan in a mostly catholic neighborhood. It sucks, don't it?"
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Perfection" by l mo
- "I like this. It kinda had the feel of being in a novel or story. I enjoyed it."
Posted by bpathos on "Mercenary" by l mo
- "fill up our minds with nonsense, give us something nearly impossible to aspire to so that way when our spirit is crushed we just become a drone."
Posted by Unknown on "Dreams of the Children" by l mo
- "its called psychological warfare and its design is intended to mold innocent young minds into functional members of society. "
Posted by Unknown on "Dreams of the Children" by l mo
- "I like for it's simplicity it also gives the thoughts of the child clearly."
Posted by Lethie on "Perfection" by l mo
- "this poem amused me for a moment, but it doesn't flow as well as I'd like it to. The random switch from rhyming to not with little bo peep threw me off a bit as well."
Posted by colorapathy on "Nursery Rhymes for Tiny Tots" by l mo
- "Ahh, that old chestnut, such an exciting yet terrifying time to be had, however you handle the situation include a bit of humor, it's good for flexing words and ideas....and if it doesn't go your way then 'you were only fucking around'
....keep us posted, good luck."
Posted by Unknown on "Stuck" by l mo
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