Log In
My Pain Is Relieved As The Blood Flows From The Wounds I Made
By l mo
Let me shed my tears
And wipe away my façade of happiness
Let me show you the real me
The real me who hurts inside so much that she cannot bear it.
I'm dead inside.
My heart has been ripped out
And thrown back in my face.
I'm not pretty, nor skinny
But I'll bleed myself beautiful
Starve myself 'til I'm thin.
Then maybe you'll love me again.
It might be shallow
It might be insane
But I would depart my soul
To be with you again.
I'll cut up my wrist
And twirl razorblades around my fingers
Slip them into my mouth,
Just to feel the pain.
So I can embrace your touch again.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2006 german kitten
Awards
Comments on "My Pain Is Relieved As The Blood Flows From The Wounds I Made"
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
This is a dreadfully beautiful piece. The pain you show compared to the love you have are amazing. I love this, write on. Like Fourknaz said "I'll bleed myself beautiful" its an amazing line that compares the two subjects of the poem.
-
On Saturday, September 12, 2009, Fourknaz
(6)
wrote:
I'll bleed myself beautiful. Hauntingly excellent! Well done.
-
On Sunday, December 3, 2006, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
c'mon, Lisa, you know that's not the answer, this write cries out hurt...I agree, but still, I hope you're not cutting again.
-
A former member wrote:
So much Pain in your writing. I felt my heart being ripped out through your words:-( You kind of made me a little sad. ][ ][
-
On Tuesday, November 28, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
"But I would depart my soul/ to be with you again" That line was such a gem. Write on.
-
A former member wrote:
to gain the right to touch is not really that hard, though it usually isn't worth it... its love that we want to gain, but if that can be gained its only by being your beautiful self.
-
A former member wrote:
and in general, only the truly screwed over people are attracted by the self mutilation. Actually, always.
-
On Tuesday, November 28, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
intensity with vengeance.....every word ...moved the very depths of my soul....relentless desire.
-
A former member wrote:
i loved this poem from you. i know exactly how you feel. about cutting. nice write ~ red.
l mo's Latest Works Feed
Join