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Certain Uncertainty
By l mo
He loves me,
He loves me not.
Should I leave,
Or should I not.
My mind is filled
Up to the brim
With confusing thoughts,
All about him.
Sometimes he's great-
A real prince charming,
But then sometimes
He acts alarming.
He confuses me
More so than ever
Should I stay with him
Until forever?
This sounds quite harsh
Its not meant to be
I just want you to know
I want you to see
I love him more
Than any boy
He is my world,
My life, my joy.
Pease listen close
Listen hard
I am not mad
But I'm not unscarred
Sometimes your words
Cut like a knife
And make me want
To take my own life
My mind is filled
Up to the brim
With certain uncertainty
Over him.
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© 2006 night_sky
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On Saturday, December 18, 2010, jjrh187
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wrote:
Nice work.Went together very well.
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On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Guillotine
(172) wrote:
the fact that you managed to pull of a rhyming piece and me ejoy it, labels this as an excellent, indepth piece of writing! ~Guill
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A former member wrote:
A well written piece and the meaning and vision are not lost upon me. Well versed
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On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Cattarax
(216) wrote:
I know this feeling all to well !!!!! great read and wonderful write
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A former member wrote:
wow, very perfect... in structure and rhyme and expressing a universal appeal as well, neat
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