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Frozen Rose Petals
By Thorn
Snowflakes fall to the ground like the lifeless bodies of fools
Whose severed heads remain trapped in the clouds that block out the hope
of sunlight
Snowflakes shimmer like dreams of what could be
Only to be destroyed by the unstoppable power of what is
And melt into glum memories of what might have been
The day shines like promises of happiness
That ever prove empty as the faith of the betrayed
When the inevitable darkness
Covers all
With misery
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© 2007 Thorn
Published on Friday, January 26, 2007.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Frozen Rose Petals"
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A former member wrote:
You can feel the emotion in every stanza. I liked it.
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On Monday, December 24, 2007, italianbella
(185)
wrote:
very beautiful write:)
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On Tuesday, March 20, 2007, thornyrose
(23) wrote:
hey there, been a while thought i would peek in and look around. the words hit hard in this, the cold rawness....good work ....
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
wonderful write.
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On Saturday, February 3, 2007, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
That 1st stanza was fuckin' superb and sucked me right into the rest of the piece. To me, this feels like a development in your poetic style - Long may it continue, dude!!
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Damn.
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A former member wrote:
it was sad but very well written-cavewoman
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
beautiful and breaking imagery at the same time....digging in with a grip cold and punishing yet without hammering .... well done
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Thorn
(283) wrote:
I wrote this very spur-of-the-moment on a napkin during dinner on the worst day I've had in a long time.
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On Sunday, January 28, 2007, zanewill
(84) wrote:
thorn, this poem beautiful. the imagery in the beginning great; the despair is there...i feel like u could have taken this poem further...but i feel like that with most of mine 2...write on, bro
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
wow youre a pretty heavy dude
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On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
i wish i could reach out and give you a hug. this has so much emotion in it, i dont know where to start. this is just amazing, one of the best i've read by you although they're all great. truly amazing. -Kel
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On Friday, January 26, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
this made me sad...so well done. A poem that feels is perfect.
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On Friday, January 26, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
This is why I love you. Emotion. Even if it is a sad kind.
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On Friday, January 26, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this was bleak and sad..left me feeling hopeless and lost ~kristy
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On Friday, January 26, 2007, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
I liked the first on better, but this one still kept me enthralled.. Nice job dear ~Mirrored Nymph
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