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The "fary"
By veingo
one day A fary was flying and sudinly . she qwit fling when she
stoppd she saw
A devie. the devie said to her be very very bad for me and I
will grant all
your wishis for you. but the fary said no no no I will not
be bad. not for
you or eny one eise. why said the devie. because I want to
be In heven
when I diy.said the fary. you know said the devie my piace isint
so bad.
I am stil not going. fin said the devie go to your stopid
drem life.
I will said the fary. and she did the next day the fary dide
she
wint to heven she livd happy ever . ops and she never sall
thr devle again.
This is my daughter's story. She spells just a little better than the old
man, the only difference is, I have spell check. heh.
She's 9 years old, but has wisdom, & talent that I can only hope to have
some day. (can you tell I'm proud?)
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© 2007 veingo
Published on Monday, January 15, 2007.
Filed under: "Fantasy" and
"Short Story"
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On Friday, November 28, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(239)
wrote:
You should be proud. A lot of imagination is in these lines. I find my children give me strength and hope to strive to be a better person - for them. I see this is the same for you :-)
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A former member wrote:
that's cute.
>TimeBomb
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On Saturday, March 17, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Awwwww Ron this is the most adorable thing ever...
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
This is so sweet.
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On Monday, January 29, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Wow. She's going to be as an amazing writer as you V. and hopefully with the same kickass personality! Your amazing V. I want you to look at yourself today and just grin, because you are simply amazing.
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A former member wrote:
all
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A former member wrote:
aww thats cute. LoL. I liked the Ron. It made me smile. Its always nice to read a child story every once in awhile. ][ ][
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On Saturday, January 20, 2007, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...this almost brought a tear to my eye...if it were my daughter, I'd probably be crying my eyes out...no *censored for the kid* you're proud...
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On Saturday, January 20, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this is so precious :)
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A former member wrote:
this is amazing. she's a future dark poet :)
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, Step_20
(25) wrote:
Ahh, sweet religious influence. Weird when you really see what they tell our kids, huh? Be good so you get rewarded when you DIE!! Still, she is smart and wrote a great (creepy) poem for her age. We will certainly look forward to her company.
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On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, veingo
(533) wrote:
Not sure exactly what you mean. Care to elaborate??
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On Monday, January 15, 2007, soul dancer
(96) wrote:
A dp poet in training - what an imagination!!
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On Monday, January 15, 2007, call to arms
(31) wrote:
aww this is so cute. tell her to keep writing! :)
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On Monday, January 15, 2007, veingo
(533) wrote:
She's doing a lot better at it than I am, lately. :)
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On Monday, January 15, 2007, Adam
(245) wrote:
wow, that for a young girl is very nice. Hey you got a good girl to that is cool!
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