The "fary"

By veingo

one day A fary was flying and sudinly . she qwit fling when she stoppd she saw
A devie. the devie said to her be very very bad for me and I will grant all
your wishis for you. but the fary said no no no I will not be bad. not for
you or eny one eise. why said the devie. because I want to be In heven
when I diy.said the fary. you know said the devie my piace isint so bad.
I am stil not going. fin said the devie go to your stopid drem life.
I will said the fary. and she did the next day the fary dide she
wint to heven she livd happy ever . ops and she never sall thr devle again.

This is my daughter's story. She spells just a little better than the old man, the only difference is, I have spell check. heh.
She's 9 years old, but has wisdom, & talent that I can only hope to have some day. (can you tell I'm proud?)

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Published on Monday, January 15, 2007. Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Short Story"

Comments on "The "fary""

On Friday, November 28, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237) wrote:

You should be proud. A lot of imagination is in these lines. I find my children give me strength and hope to strive to be a better person - for them. I see this is the same for you :-)
A former member wrote: that's cute. >TimeBomb
On Saturday, March 17, 2007, Army Barbie (316) wrote:

Awwwww Ron this is the most adorable thing ever...
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

This is so sweet.
On Monday, January 29, 2007, Err0r (358) wrote:

Wow. She's going to be as an amazing writer as you V. and hopefully with the same kickass personality! Your amazing V. I want you to look at yourself today and just grin, because you are simply amazing.
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A former member wrote: aww thats cute. LoL. I liked the Ron. It made me smile. Its always nice to read a child story every once in awhile. ][ ][
On Saturday, January 20, 2007, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...this almost brought a tear to my eye...if it were my daughter, I'd probably be crying my eyes out...no *censored for the kid* you're proud...
On Saturday, January 20, 2007, Sin (1135) wrote:

this is so precious :)
A former member wrote: this is amazing. she's a future dark poet :)
On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, Step_20 (25) wrote:

Ahh, sweet religious influence. Weird when you really see what they tell our kids, huh? Be good so you get rewarded when you DIE!! Still, she is smart and wrote a great (creepy) poem for her age. We will certainly look forward to her company.
On Tuesday, January 16, 2007, veingo (526) wrote:

Not sure exactly what you mean. Care to elaborate??
On Monday, January 15, 2007, soul dancer (95) wrote:

A dp poet in training - what an imagination!!
On Monday, January 15, 2007, call to arms (31) wrote:

aww this is so cute. tell her to keep writing! :)
On Monday, January 15, 2007, veingo (526) wrote:

She's doing a lot better at it than I am, lately. :)
On Monday, January 15, 2007, Adam (242) wrote:

wow, that for a young girl is very nice. Hey you got a good girl to that is cool!