Comments by Step_20

  • "I had to read it twice before i understood the title...i really liked that about it. Very cool way to describe a hug. Loved when you said 'a hundred words blinded me' First real verse i've read in a while a favorite"
    Posted by Step_20 on "how to escape a strait jacket" by not an addict
  • "This reminds me of looking into the mirror in a semi dark room. It's sad and familiar...more people should read this...it's going in my favorites "
    Posted by Step_20 on "What has she become" by StAinedNblood
  • "a chant more than a poem. It sounds like something that could be repeated over and over...kinda like Demos said. A favorite of mine"
    Posted by Step_20 on "Night So Dark" by cre
  • "Ahh, sweet religious influence. Weird when you really see what they tell our kids, huh? Be good so you get rewarded when you DIE!! Still, she is smart and wrote a great (creepy) poem for her age. We will certainly look forward to her company."
    Posted by Step_20 on "The "fary"" by veingo
  • "Behold! You have now met someone with less complex emotions than you, and they (he/I) does/do not write poetry as well. I got lost in it...liked it. "
    Posted by Step_20 on "WALK AWAY" by EnlightenedFailure
  • "no comments since 04 on this one/// but i hope you never drowned yourself... you can put it on paper instead of on your skin. and you shouldn't feel like people should know you are depressed/ maybe they are happy "
    Posted by Step_20 on "Is it real?" by DeathSentance
  • "That wasn't fair, really, because your poem kicked ass. Just what I thought of at the time. I didn't intend to write that. You are right, relationships are hard and you wore it all in this poem. kept my attention well. "
    Posted by Step_20 on "The Life Story..." by slightlygothic89
  • "It was complete, perfect, except for one thing. You left out all the good times, sympathy thief learn from the torture, the sadness, the grief you'll be a father some day too, with kids that you'll try to teach"
    Posted by Step_20 on "The Life Story..." by slightlygothic89
  • "...commented on this for a while. *step_20 raised his glass and drinks to your poem* "
    Posted by Step_20 on "my mommys fucked" by coly
  • "Raw...I like it.Kinda like peering in someone's window.The only part I didn't like is when you said you are weak.Not if you are still standing.One alcoholic to another(you said you like beer a lot!)it gets better...much, much better.Funny that no one has "
    Posted by Step_20 on "my mommys fucked" by coly
  • "Maybe I am a little late to comment, but I am glad I 'randomly' landed on this work. The use of the word 'yawn' nearly stopped my heartbeat. you gave me chills man...just what I needed before sleep...gracias"
    Posted by Step_20 on "The Failing" by Stormcomin
  • "In the style of 'Catch 22' where synchronicity is skewed enough to draw attention to the fact that even the author (or main character) is unaware of when, why, or what they want. Very focused, but not without all of life's envy and distraction...bien."
    Posted by Step_20 on "The Fall of the Unfiltered Camel Blues" by Doc
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