facsimile: odium for fainéant

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Published on Wednesday, July 12, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

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On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, Tonights Decision (132) wrote:

This was fantastic....the lines " consuming beneath dark waters " fills my mind, it felt like loving someone, or wanting something under lethal waters.
On Wednesday, June 20, 2007, Tonights Decision (132) wrote:

the poem brings such a subtile melancholy.. creeping up my spine..wow i will be reading more of you for sure.
On Thursday, April 19, 2007, torn_beauty (77) wrote:

Absolutely, just, Fantastic! So discriptive and a disturbing. Excellent job.
A former member wrote: and try to spell better! '...have no superlatives..' i mean to say.
A former member wrote: yup, I can only echo what others have said -it's just my opinion but this is beyond sublime -it moved me and intrigued me on so many levels. Too many lines to quote and i ahve nos uperlatives to do it justice so I will just say...wow!
A former member wrote: "capillaries tingle with an old echo./ veneration for an absent shadow I drink from your hollow hole" Darkly sexual, thrillfull, wanton, volatile... a nice lil pleasure fountain of words to stab "into the deepest places". This poem is a vampire,...
On Wednesday, November 22, 2006, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

as always, i stand in awe of your talent. this time wishing i was part of your life to have an inside out look on your writing. i guess you have done alot of growing little one
On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

Wow. this was amazing. ~*~Tart~*~
On Wednesday, September 20, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

If this piece was a cup of hot tea, I would drink every drop and lick the saucer... Ciao, T/S
On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Wicked. "Foaming white at the corners. Comatose. I give you nothing." Red and black and white and deep. Like oil filming at the top of a pot-hole in the rain. Write on.
On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, DoctorAsh (371) wrote:

This piece reminds me of a fish.
A former member wrote: immaculate.
A former member wrote: very violent, very emotional, and well-expressed... a genuine piece of art
On Thursday, July 13, 2006, Guillotine (168) wrote:

I missed your writing so much... and you finally come back with a stab to the heart with your lyrical prowess. Brilliant...
On Wednesday, July 12, 2006, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

You're still so far above me in so many ways. I'll comment better when I comprehend better. For now, this will have to do. Love it.
On Wednesday, July 12, 2006, Anth (1126) wrote:

its so good to see a new post from you, still as vital and movielike as ever. heartwrenchingly sublime poetry in your unmistakable style, this was a visceral work of art inciting all sorts of senses
On Wednesday, July 12, 2006, Anth (1126) wrote:

i hope youll continue to post too, cos i really missed your style an the feelings i get from your works