i press...

By apophenia

i press you into my palm
grind with heavy word
sincerity out of you
with thumb and need
as you once did
ground my displaced body with one foot
this wavering idea of self from self
you from me
would you think me crazy if i informed upon myself
the awful confusion
(of not accepting the obvious)
the distance, the physical space
that Einstein insists we cannot co-inhabit
at once
ever
(i wish i had such clarity) why does that make me feel so alone?
would you believe in me
if i told you i needed something to believe in?

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© 2006 apophenia
Published on Wednesday, February 22, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Monday, July 24, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    this is, actually, very good!

  • MercyRain On Friday, June 26, 2015, MercyRain (105)By person wrote:

    i press.... echoes reaching through almost a decade now to still haunt... in the meaning? in the connection? which haunts more? the futility of sending messages back in time? I dunno... I miss you though... :/

  • A former member wrote: This is great, This was a definite read I can relate to. Good Job.

  • A former member wrote: Fantastically written!

  • MercyRain On Saturday, April 17, 2010, MercyRain (105)By person wrote:

    Ah, my dear... i miss the banter, the pushing boundaries... i hope you are making the universe treat you well

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, May 15, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Where oh where is one of my favourite poet philosophers? I miss you! Scholar

  • birdwell On Sunday, March 18, 2007, birdwell (138)By person wrote:

    i for one, choose to hang on your every word... it's been too long. post something new so i can be more prompt. ~db~

  • Jonas On Saturday, October 14, 2006, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    as time goes on i find it harder and harder to leave words that express my pleasure at having read an author's poem...

  • A former member wrote: this was really good

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I can feel every word this...your quest for beauty, surprise and magic within a scientifically explanable universe...I think you yourself are evidence of this magic. Scholar

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Cells combined, neurons firing telling your heart to beat, blood flowing into your brain keeping you conscious...and yet Scholar

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    when I read your work you are so wonderfully beyond merely that organic state. Your intellectual curiousity and talent combine in such a delicious way...I always look forward to your pieces, my fellow wanderer. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Wolk On Sunday, May 28, 2006, Wolk (54)By person wrote:

    Wonderful writing.

  • A former member wrote: oooooh my... yes I love this, you have taught me soooo much in a very short period of time, we are linked here by these thoughts and the reflection of the last interrogative lines is explanatory

  • manywalks On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    I cant get enough of this one, folding beneath my tongue. ~ wen

  • ApathysKiss On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    god, i've read this 3 times now and it's consuming, every thought provoking line and question burrows its way deeper to that profound end. i could read this over and over and find different apices...between the longer sides of which links us

  • ApathysKiss On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    through the shorter separates but never endured. sheesh.

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