RIP
By shadowsinthelight
As I lay this clichéd bouquet
Upon the heart shaped stone
I realize, these tears in my eyes
Are no one’s sins but my own
A mute soliloquy
In my loneliest of times
A vent for the misery
You with your simple rhymes
Yes, I have sad regret
You were turned away
Through this selfish neglect
You are part of yesterday
As I lay claim to this passé shame
Dim memories etched on stone
I’ll not again invoke your name
Your grave, dug on my own
I ignored the need
Allowed my heart to deny
As I released the dream
The passion slowly died
I let the music fade
And never said good-bye
It seems like such a waste
‘Til now, I never even cried
As I lay this withered roundelay
Upon this heart of stone
I understand, the blood on my hands
Is no one’s, but my own.
So rest in peace
Please, rest in peace
Sleep eternally
Rest in peace
Dear sweet poetry
You’re dead inside of me
© 2005 by Steve Giacomini
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On Friday, March 16, 2012, dumbone
(62) wrote:
...wow... nice work... read it once... twice... now it's my fifth time... just cant get enough of it... thank you...
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On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet
(273) wrote:
nice write!
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A former member wrote:
absoulutely loved the first and last verse, although the rest were brilliantly painful
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On Friday, June 9, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
What words can I place here that wouldn't sound like I was a bumbling idiot? This was poetry, beyond poetry. Dead or not! Wow. Julia~
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A former member wrote:
hahaha fucking astounding verse... I believe that this has killed everything inside of me and i must take it with me to the grave.... *salute*
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, cemetarydance
(21) wrote:
I've read this poem a couple of times and I really like how it sounds.
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On Wednesday, November 2, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
wow ~T~