Cut

By l mo

Intricate patterns cover your arms
All a beautiful pearly tone
Criss-crossed from your shoulder to your wrist
Some still fresh and red

New ones added frequently
Intersecting randomly
No two look alike

On your right arm lie the words "Fuck life"
And "Life sucks" on your left
Covered by more pearly scars

On your thighs and around your hips
More scars lay hidden, with the same pearly tone

You're ready to add to the design
And pull out your Exacto knife
You cut yourself
Swift and deep
And feel the comforting pain

Your friends know your secret
But they won't tell
They do it too

Down the line
Across the block
You cut every which way

Beautiful patterns cover your skin
To help the hurt that lies within...


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Copyright 2005 night_sky
Published on Sunday, August 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anybody_Killette On Monday, August 29, 2005, Anybody_Killette (47)By person wrote:

    Don't listen to anyone who say cutting is annoying and pointless, becausethey do something just as bad. beautiful poem.

  • Doc On Sunday, August 28, 2005, Doc (143)By person wrote:

    Yeah, well written, its understandable, I find cutting and cutters highly annoying more than anything else. Get it out of your head, as it will provide nothing but irritation.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Sunday, August 28, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    cutting is so cliche and pathetic...this wasn't a badly written poem, though...-l-

  • A former member wrote: ugh. its nicly written but i hate the subject, im sure most of dp will agree.

  • l mo On Sunday, August 28, 2005, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    yeah. my friend had just told me that she started cutting again after like, 4 months, so i had to get the subject out of my head and this was the result....


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