thoughts on god

By doll on the rag

"if i were the world,
would there be a you?"

"someone to watch over me,
take care of me."

(if i were the world)

god is nothing more
than a boy with pills
watching a girl rolling
for the first time

god is nothing more
than lovers on ecstasy.

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Published on Friday, July 22, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "thoughts on god"

On Monday, July 25, 2005, not an addict (45) wrote:

an evening that will forever be my religion (were the blue lights, perhaps, our dogma?) *love*
On Monday, July 25, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

perhaps, though to me they were more an altar at which i found myself persistantly kneeling. i don't believe, however, any other (a)theistic practice has such perfect choir music.
A former member wrote: i find the last stanza to be an outstanding analogy. The words of wisdom are not lengthy and drawn, but short and brief.
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, blue (1409) wrote:

damn. "if i were the world" damn. ~b
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, Anth (1126) wrote:

my fave of yours
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

thank you, sweet. =)
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, redtearswhitesnow (79) wrote:

Wow.Beautiful.
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, Elegant Kiss (178) wrote:

Dollface.:)
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

amyamy. =)
On Friday, July 22, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

your beautiful:)
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

hardly. just a gilder of memories, a glamourizer of past happenings.
On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

though the experience in itself is no falsification or exaggeration... it's just inembraceable with mere words. i've tried.
On Friday, July 22, 2005, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

I want to kiss your brain.
On Friday, July 22, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

it would be kind of sticky.
On Friday, July 22, 2005, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

That's quite alright.
On Friday, July 22, 2005, doll on the rag (200) wrote:

you're scaring people away from my poems. stop that.
On Friday, July 22, 2005, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

I will not.