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thoughts on god
By doll on the rag
"if i were the world,
would there be a you?"
"someone to watch over me,
take care of me."
(if i were the world)
god is nothing more
than a boy with pills
watching a girl rolling
for the first time
god is nothing more
than lovers on ecstasy.
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Copyright 2005 doll on the rag
Published on Friday, July 22, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, July 25, 2005, not an addict
(45)
wrote:
an evening that will forever be my religion (were the blue lights, perhaps, our dogma?) *love*
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On Monday, July 25, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
perhaps, though to me they were more an altar at which i found myself persistantly kneeling. i don't believe, however, any other (a)theistic practice has such perfect choir music.
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A former member wrote:
i find the last stanza to be an outstanding analogy. The words of wisdom are not lengthy and drawn, but short and brief.
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
damn. "if i were the world" damn. ~b
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, Anth
(1133) wrote:
my fave of yours
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
thank you, sweet. =)
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, redtearswhitesnow
(79) wrote:
Wow.Beautiful.
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(182) wrote:
Dollface.:)
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
amyamy. =)
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
your beautiful:)
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
hardly. just a gilder of memories, a glamourizer of past happenings.
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On Saturday, July 23, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
though the experience in itself is no falsification or exaggeration... it's just inembraceable with mere words. i've tried.
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I want to kiss your brain.
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
it would be kind of sticky.
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
That's quite alright.
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
you're scaring people away from my poems. stop that.
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I will not.
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