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Happiness
By TheBardOfBlasphemy
Weightless, shapeless, senseless, fateless
Lightless, timeless, soundless, spaceless
E M P T I N E S S
There is less to this useless nothingness
than I could care to confess. Life is a mess…
A I M L E S S
Unless my direction be described as “downness”,
or regress. I’m unguided by a starless sky –
but I couldn’t care less…
D R E A M L E S S
It’s pointless to sleep less and think more unless you
possess a dream. My guess is best left unsaid –
I might as well be headless.
There is nothing left…
G O D L E S S
This figureless devotion leaves me fearless,
it leaves me cheerless,
I am fatherless and hungerless.
I feel no need to bless the worthless rest,
my only creed – to love me less than hate itself.
THERE IS NOTHING LEFT
Unless…
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Copyright 2005 The Bard of Blasphemy
Comments on "Happiness"
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A former member wrote:
Well written. Discusses the questions of the lost. I have been and know the words. Again, well written.
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A former member wrote:
i loved ithis poem, the feelings i get are amazing.
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On Friday, September 30, 2005, Err0r
(358)
wrote:
The rhyme scheme flows beautifully. :D Very nice.
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On Saturday, August 13, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Absolutly wonderful write. Powerful in every way.
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On Friday, July 29, 2005, LiP Stiches
(42) wrote:
Faithless...is untangeable hope that is formless and pours onto the floor like my cowarding and shapless life because of my niceness......I like how you use the words and the rythmic tone of the nese ness ness
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A former member wrote:
Unless indeed... the mind wanders at the open vastness left to tinker over if there were secret lines that continued this peice.
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
very intelligent and refreshing piece...glad you found your way back to DP ~kristy
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
oh, very clever with that last word. >:) Damn fine. I'm still grinning at the coolness of that. Lovely subtext.
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A former member wrote:
I love the flow of this peice
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