Girl
By Sex Slave
(i don't really know about this...it not really good but it has alot a
meaning behide it so hate it or love it, I don't care)~Danny~
Slowly she walks into school
Takes a deep breath
Questions running through her mind
Today maybe they'll only say one hurtful thing
She never expected it to be true
But hope that someday they would accept her brought her back
"It would be nice if i had some friends", she thought
Or maybe even if that boy she liked noticed her
O how that would make her day
To have someone care for her in the way her family could not
Time to face them she thought
It won't be as bad today
They won't make me cry this time
As soon as the kids saw her they new what to do
All they had to do was call her some names
They never really knew her just that she would cry
The girl tried to hold back her tears to keep her pride
Maybe if she thought of happy times
This time she wouldn't cry
Soon the tears swelled in her eyes
As she ran away, the kids laughing behind
She ran to the only place she knew she would be safe
There she cried even though she not why
Yes it hurt for them to treat her that way
But why
The things weren't true
Not a single one
She knew what to do it was time to make it stop
Slowly she walked to find the kids that had tormented her
When she came to they the names calling came again
But this time was different
This time the girl didn't run away and cry
She stood there to show she wasn't afrid
To prove that she wasn't going to to bullied anymore
Today the girl decided to take back her life
Comments on "Girl"
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On Saturday, July 1, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
the ending was very heart clenching.. like, man if only i could've helped her in some way type of poem.. it was really amazing how you could ryhme and tell a story.. i also saw some spelling mistakes.. just to let you know
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On Thursday, May 26, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
Aww honey, this was awesome, I know the feeling full well of being harassed...*hugs*
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
i can relate to this....for years and years i was a quiet little girl, abused at home and abused at school.....then one day i snapped and my reign of violence began.......just recently i've been attempting to lengthen my very short fuse but.......~elisa
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A former member wrote:
by the way i love the point you make in this peice just as much as the peice itself
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A former member wrote:
i think that this was great and dont think it need the first messege though something like this is hard to hate.... i loved it great write and i am intreged to see more
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
thanx-danny
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On Wednesday, May 25, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Who cares who loves it or hates it. It's your very own, and thats all that counts. However, I think its wonderful. ~*~Tart~*~