The Gruesome

By A_Puppet_Show


Circle the gruesome in fear,
Swirling in the darkest of nights,
Just two bugs and lights;
Hold life in palm but forget,
In much regret a face so sorry,
Falling towards another sun,
Never tire! never,
Vanish;

For gods sake, bend!
Welcome to the ceremony,
We are solemn men under sun,
Cloaked in suits of the moment,
Pay weeping women,
To steal the show; lets screw,
Get on those fallen metaphors,
Take pride in forgotten erection;

Circle all in palm,
Vanish not in fear.

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Copyright 2005 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Monday, May 23, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I don't think I'll ever be smart enough to truely understand anything you write, but I can still admire it

  • Anth On Monday, May 23, 2005, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    incredible... the wisdom you portray, the feelings hard to put into words. like setting fire to dead constellations,

  • Anth On Monday, May 23, 2005, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    breathing life into a myth... the feeling of this was something like listening to early norwegian black metal.

  • Anth On Monday, May 23, 2005, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    .a triumphant rising realisation of things.so much can be taken from this write, the ending lines of the 1st and beigginning lines of the 2nds verse seriously impressed me

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