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Mistake
By Sex Slave
Dark night
Rain clouds
Music blasting
Bloody razor
Young girl
No friends
Last resort
Perfect time
All alone
Tears flowing
No love
A mistake
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Copyright 2005 Danielle Heyboer
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On Saturday, July 1, 2006, mywristshurt
(408)
wrote:
oh man can i relate... nice touch at the end too
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
I swear it wasn't me kya *cowers* i haven't done that in a long time-Danny
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
damn right you better cower...*growls*
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
No need to repeat what has been said already.
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On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
fast paced indeed, but very sad...young girl better not be a young girl named Danielle...
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
this flows extreamly well, it's a fast paced well worded write, nice job
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