Mistake

By Sex Slave

Dark night

Rain clouds

Music blasting

Bloody razor

Young girl

No friends

Last resort

Perfect time

All alone

Tears flowing

No love

A mistake

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Published on Friday, May 20, 2005. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Mistake"

On Saturday, July 1, 2006, mywristshurt (405) wrote:

oh man can i relate... nice touch at the end too
On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Sex Slave (78) wrote:

I swear it wasn't me kya *cowers* i haven't done that in a long time-Danny
On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

damn right you better cower...*growls*
On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Serenity (469) wrote:

No need to repeat what has been said already.
On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

fast paced indeed, but very sad...young girl better not be a young girl named Danielle...
On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Necromancer (71) wrote:

this flows extreamly well, it's a fast paced well worded write, nice job