The Right Choice

By Sex Slave

I had the razor in my hand

All the right reasons to just end all the pain

What’s left to live for when I have nothing?

Tears I once kept locked up now flowed like a river

I can't take it any more

They just don't understand

The reasons I act the way I do

I can't change who I am

Now to end the pain

Just one cut and all the pain will go away

But wait...

What about my mother, my friends...

Would they miss me if I were gone?

I think about the good old times

When I used to be so happy

What happened to me?

Maybe....

I could be happy again

Slowly the razor falls from my hand

Today I had a choice live or die

Life is a precious thing to have

And I made the right choice



Please if you are feeling depressed and feel like ending it all talk to a friend I might just be the best thing you've ever done
~Danny~

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Copyright 2005 Danielle Heyboer
Published on Wednesday, April 20, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    Haha! better...good job, honest and heartfelt indeed.:D:D:D Scholar

  • happilydepressed On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    it's good danny, and it was the right choice, no change, perfect

  • Sex Slave On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Sex Slave (78)By person wrote:

    Im not really sure about this so tell me if it is good or if i should change some things-Danny

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