Sunshine Dust

By happilydepressed

She smells just like sunshine dust
Love at first lust
And while you’re asleep
Into your fantasies and dreams she’ll creep
As she rests in an empty grave
She begins to crave
Craves to seduce
Resistance is of no use
She’s a siren a beautiful seductress
An alluring temptress
She’s a succubus
So hide your lust
At first pleasure she’ll inflict
But as you sleep your breaths will begin to constrict
Though her deeds are evil and spiteful
She’ painfully delightful
And you can’t help to be obsessed
Can’t help not to be impressed
She’ll strut over and lick your ear
She’ll whisper dirty words only you can hear
By then it’s too late
You won’t wait, won’t hesitate
She’ll get you to drink too much wine
Until you’re feeling fine
She’s dressed in leather and lace
 It’ll look like she’s ready to embrace
But you pass out and never came to
It’s all over as fast as the climax grew
As you lie on your empty bed
Cold, stiff, and dead
She took your breath and grasped
And all you did was gasped
You just couldn’t resist
You got your last kiss
She wipes the poison from her lips
But before she leaves she always collects her tips
Pleasure comes with a cost
Now your soul is lost
On your knees in Hell you look up and see her face
The poison you can still taste
Tears of pain in your eyes
You ask why and she replies
“You fell asleep on me and you see”
“No one does that to me”
She giggles and with an evil grin
Leans over and grabs your chin
Licks your face
Easily forcing your mouth open and gives you a taste
A taste of what you never had and will never obtain
In this Hell you’ll remain
Screaming in agony from the torture
Endlessly searching for her
But you’ll never find her, she finds you
And this is the most painful part; she’s found someone new





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Copyright 2005 happilydepressed
Published on Thursday, April 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is excellent!

  • A former member wrote: you are a good writer. your words are delivered so smoothly and it seems as though they are not thought out as much as just expressed. impressive.

  • Jenni On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Jenni (40)By person wrote:

    wow, i'm speachless... see, don't ever say your not a good writer, because you know you are.

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    i got lucky with this one

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, April 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    luck has nothing to do with it..

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    i'm not talented, really i'm not

  • Serenity On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    What are you talking about? You can make great poems. It's a talent!

  • Jenni On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Jenni (40)By person wrote:

    quit being such a weenie :p

  • Serenity On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Wow! I can't think of how to describe how much I love this. Great job!

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    cool beans, it's sorta a tribute poem to you

  • Serenity On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Hehe ::Grins and huggles:: XD

  • A former member wrote: this was awesome!

  • Lotophagi On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    yum..... this is beautifully naughty as Elise said *winks* grrrrrrr..... awesome write.

  • A former member wrote: wow that was very good :-)) MER!

  • Elise On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Elise (187)By person wrote:

    Wow, very well written ^_^ I like the way it ended too, wrapped up all nicely. Today things seem naughty ^_~

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    thanks, very naughty indeed

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