Sunshine Dust
By happilydepressed
She smells just like sunshine dust
Love at first lust
And while
you’re asleep
Into your fantasies and dreams she’ll creep
As she rests in an empty grave
She begins to crave
Craves
to seduce
Resistance is of no use
She’s a siren a beautiful
seductress
An alluring temptress
She’s a succubus
So hide your lust
At first pleasure she’ll inflict
But as
you sleep your breaths will begin to constrict
Though her deeds
are evil and spiteful
She’ painfully delightful
And you
can’t help to be obsessed
Can’t help not to be impressed
She’ll strut over and lick your ear
She’ll whisper dirty
words only you can hear
By then it’s too late
You won’t
wait, won’t hesitate
She’ll get you to drink too much wine
Until you’re feeling fine
She’s dressed in leather and lace
It’ll look like she’s ready to embrace
But you pass out
and never came to
It’s all over as fast as the climax grew
As you lie on your empty bed
Cold, stiff, and dead
She took
your breath and grasped
And all you did was gasped
You just
couldn’t resist
You got your last kiss
She wipes the poison
from her lips
But before she leaves she always collects her tips
Pleasure comes with a cost
Now your soul is lost
On your
knees in Hell you look up and see her face
The poison you can still
taste
Tears of pain in your eyes
You ask why and she replies
“You fell asleep on me and you see”
“No one does that to
me”
She giggles and with an evil grin
Leans over and grabs
your chin
Licks your face
Easily forcing your mouth open and
gives you a taste
A taste of what you never had and will never obtain
In this Hell you’ll remain
Screaming in agony from the torture
Endlessly searching for her
But you’ll never find her, she
finds you
And this is the most painful part; she’s found someone
new
Comments on "Sunshine Dust"
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A former member wrote:
This is excellent!
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A former member wrote:
you are a good writer. your words are delivered so smoothly and it seems as though they are not thought out as much as just expressed. impressive.
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Jenni
(40) wrote:
wow, i'm speachless... see, don't ever say your not a good writer, because you know you are.
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
i got lucky with this one
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
luck has nothing to do with it..
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
i'm not talented, really i'm not
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
What are you talking about? You can make great poems. It's a talent!
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Jenni
(40) wrote:
quit being such a weenie :p
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Wow! I can't think of how to describe how much I love this. Great job!
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
cool beans, it's sorta a tribute poem to you
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Hehe ::Grins and huggles:: XD
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A former member wrote:
this was awesome!
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
yum..... this is beautifully naughty as Elise said *winks* grrrrrrr..... awesome write.
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A former member wrote:
wow that was very good :-)) MER!
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Elise
(187) wrote:
Wow, very well written ^_^ I like the way it ended too, wrapped up all nicely. Today things seem naughty ^_~
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
thanks, very naughty indeed