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I'll Make You Love Me
By A Broken Soul
Soaking wet
Your hair is sticking to your face
And there’s no where place or time
I’d rather be
Can I wipe the tears from your eyes?
Tell you there’s no reason to cry
You’ve got the world to live for
You’re all that’s hope for me
Can you lie and say that you love me?
Really care and think of no one but me
I care too much and it’s bound to show
Before it’s too late I should let go
Smile wide
I want to soak into your skin
And become another part of you
Lost within
Will you give me the time of day?
Can I find something to say to you?
There are so many words I could you
But I’ll probably forget every one of them
I need too prove I’m worthy of your time
And find away to get inside your head
Make you care more than you ever could
On your own
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Copyright 2005 Perletti
Comments on "I'll Make You Love Me"
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A former member wrote:
beautiful.... I would love to know how to do this... get inside, not only someone's head, but his heart as well...
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A former member wrote:
i've experienced this i'll make you love me situation and this uncovered that.
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177)
wrote:
I'll make you love me. Amazing.
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On Saturday, May 14, 2005, Labitina
(37) wrote:
"Before it's too late I should let go" -so true...great write
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A former member wrote:
theres always someone who we cant grasp
on to for love i like your work
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On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, Dark Goth
(43) wrote:
yeah I really like this one. nice work.
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
"Can you lie and say that you love me?" hehe, love that line...
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