Comments by Dark Goth
- "Wrote this cause my mom has a caretaker we don't trust and wish she would go away. Venting frustration most likely will lead to me not talking to mom until she sees this person can't be trusted. Also influenced by Cannibal Corpse so there is brutality."
Posted by Dark Goth on "The Caretaker Murders" by Dark Goth
- "I know there's lots of lines repeating but its more of a song I wrote for my band. So I wanted to keep it straight by writing out the order it all goes. If it wasn't for that it would've been shorter cause alot of it repeats."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Stupid Mother Fucker" by Dark Goth
- "yeah i know burn mf burn has been used such as alot of lines i've heard in many songs have been repeated. i just really liked that line i had to use it i hope i just haven't over done using that line or anything but thanks for the compliment."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Burn Your House Down" by Dark Goth
- "Thanks man. I wrote this poem dedicate it to my ex. The inspiration I got was when I found out she slept with my used to be best friend. I don't like him anymore. I wish they would both go away for a long time."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Ever Be" by Dark Goth
- "hey silent you could've put all that into one comment. they do make enough room for all that to fit. just in case you didn't know. just a helpful tip. and thanks for the feedback and yeah it basically sets the stage to lure someone into a trap."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Killing You Was The Solution To My Misery" by Dark Goth
- "ok so whoever else is reading this. fuck what prophet says there wasn't much thought in this one just gettng anger out which doesn't require much effort. also the next one i'm writing I'm spending lots more time on. It'll be a masterpiece."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Kill Shadow" by Dark Goth
- "hey good poem. and thanks for commenting on mine and yes your right thats exactly what happened. i helped them and they backstabbed me in return. just makes me wonder if its even worth helping anyone at all anymore."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Untitled" by gloominous
- "So I noticed after a bad situation I was in that my friends that left me like to steal. Can't believe my crowd of friends consisted mostly of theives. Well I'm gonna find a new group of friends and that's what influenced this poem."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Worry In The House Of Theives" by Dark Goth
- "Sometimes in order to get over a bad relationship you have to find a spell that helps you get over it. This is what I originally came up with for a spell to help me get over my bad relationship. Hopefully this will help out someone else that's looking to get over a bad relationship."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Fountain Of Light" by Dark Goth
- "I recently went through this by making these same decisions and making a prison for myself. funny how these words mean nothing until you really experience it then it means everything."
Posted by Dark Goth on "my prison" by Crimson_Angel
- "Thanks for the suggestion but I'm not changing anything. This poem says it all too perfectly. Sometimes one person's absence is enough to move on."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Glad Your Not Here" by Dark Goth
- "This poem is dedicated to this girl who left me and stole from me, then told all my friends lies about me. Now all my friends hate me. Fuck You Bitch!"
Posted by Dark Goth on "You've Taken Everything" by Dark Goth
- "wow. sometimes I feel this way about things too. nice job"
Posted by Dark Goth on "GIVER" by veingo
- "There's a 2 after this cause I already wrote one note. the first one is in my profile. this is about ending it all cause someone you cared for took everything from you and you can't go on without them."
Posted by Dark Goth on "Suicide Note 2" by Dark Goth
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