Untitled

By gloominous

Cold sheet pane
through each vein
frozen, iced
this seems to be the price
lovers fair, lovers gain
lovers only end in pain
and walk through death
bitter, chilled, alone
with traces of regret
each missed kiss
each missed call
the doors slam in fast pace
excrusiating slumber
i'm sorry i lost your number
and all the fights, and all the flares
no one cares.

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© 2008 gloominous
Published on Tuesday, May 20, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Narcissa On Tuesday, May 20, 2008, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    I liked the rhythm of this...It seemed like it needed to be longer to me for some reason...perhaps I just wasn't ready for it to finish so soon.

  • Dark Goth On Tuesday, May 20, 2008, Dark Goth (43)By person wrote:

    hey good poem. and thanks for commenting on mine and yes your right thats exactly what happened. i helped them and they backstabbed me in return. just makes me wonder if its even worth helping anyone at all anymore.

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