Suicide Note 2

By Dark Goth

My life has come to an end
Lonliness is all you have to send
No more can I continue to live
I simply cannot give
There's no reason to live anymore
You took everything I had to live for
If you still care that would mean something
But I found out that your feeling nothing

Why? I can't go on without you
I don't want to live my life

I tried to see if there was anything
Left for me to hold on to tonight
I see someone better for you
Someone's there to take you away from me
I really needed you here tonight
But you don't care to understand
This sharp knife is all that I need
If you won't hear me you'll see me bleed

Why? I can't go on without you
I don't want to live my life
Why? I can't imagine life without you
I'll end all my pain with this knife

Before you let me go
I'll show you all my scars
Take a good look at what you fucking done to me

The deepest cut is your name into my skin
Cause without you I know I cannot win
Killing myself while your livin still
I lost all hope and you took my will
Everyone else cares about me but you
Your all I cared for in this life
You left me with nothing to gain
I will show you a different kind of pain

Why? I can't go on without you
I don't want to live my life
Why? I can't imagine life without you
I'll end all my pain with this knife

Fly away my hope
Fly away my dreams
Fly away my future
Die into the cold dark night

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Copyright 2005 darkgoth
Published on Saturday, October 1, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Wolk On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, Wolk (54)By person wrote:

    I liked it. But im more into suicide notes like: Sorry for the blood.

  • Mahakala On Tuesday, October 4, 2005, Mahakala (207)By person wrote:

    hmmmmm...ok i can say that i've been in that situation...nice write

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    excuse me while I vomit. Scholar

  • Dark Goth On Saturday, October 1, 2005, Dark Goth (43)By person wrote:

    There's a 2 after this cause I already wrote one note. the first one is in my profile. this is about ending it all cause someone you cared for took everything from you and you can't go on without them.

  • Possesion On Sunday, October 2, 2005, Possesion (136)By person wrote:

    way hot.

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