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Condemned To Darkness
By Bloodofdeadpoets
My souls has been condemned with my hearts demise
And when i fall this time i dont think i will rise
I cry long tears as i slowly fade away
And as i walk along i am dead to the day
It all came so sudden i was caught unaware
and it hurts so much that i cringe with fear
My tears have now turned to blood as they usually do
And as they run down my cheek i wonder for who
Now i begin to lay down but continue to cry
Because my final hour is here and soon i will die
And with this point taken i release my final sigh
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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Sunday, March 2, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, May 7, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259)
wrote:
It's good, the third rhyme threw me off a bit, but overall I liked it, thanks for the nice write.
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A former member wrote:
I like your writing style very much
you are definatly one of my favorite writers on dp...keep up the excellent work...i love it!
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A former member wrote:
great piece!669
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A former member wrote:
hmmm...meloncholy yes, but beautiful at the same time. Keep up the writing, I look foward to more from you.
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On Monday, March 3, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
your poems are saddening (is that a word?)
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