No One See's Me

By Sex Slave

You look at me but you don't see me

You say your my friend but you don't know me

People say that I am a monster but they don't see me

Rumors spread faster than a disease

Lies about a girl that they just don't know

Try as I can it just doesn't seem to work

I keep to myself trying to ignore the lies

But if it's true that no one she's me then why?

Do I just go on like the lies about me?

Continue to hurt myself and say it's the only way

Should I stay hidden and hope no one see's me?

Or....

Should I be the one to come out and tell the truth

Be the one that tells everyone that i'm here

That it's not just thin air that they are causing pain

That there is some one here

And her name is Danielle

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Copyright 2005 Danielle Heyboer
Published on Wednesday, March 2, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • mywristshurt On Monday, May 1, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    oooooooook... this must be really really personal...

  • Serenity On Tuesday, May 24, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    This is an awesome write. And it can make you think about yourself as well.

  • Cutting_for_Freedom On Thursday, May 5, 2005, Cutting_for_Freedom (34)By person wrote:

    Absolutly awesome.

  • happilydepressed On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    i see ya, well not literally, but awesome write

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    grrrr you, who's spreading lies? *sharpens machete* you know I love you girl, and if I catch any cut's on your arms all hell will break loose:D*hugs*Love ya girl... Scholar

  • Forgotten Angel On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    im the queen of invisible :D neway..powerfully put emotions..love the ending..usually you are the only one who understands urself..funny eh? -Kel

  • A former member wrote: This is clearly very full of emotion. We all feel unseen from time to time...or more often... Good piece.

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    wow...thats a very powerful piece... i love the way you ended this, this is something I can totally relate to, VERY NICELY DONE!!!!!! ~AoD~

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