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By Sex Slave

A girl lost to the hate
Someone just trying to make it
Even tho the names stung like needles
She took it without any regret
Not a saying a single word of deffence
She took all there hate and held it inside
One day something just snapped
She took the razor to her wrist
No one will care she thought
Who would miss her after she was gone
It would still be the same
No one ever saw her tears
As held them back to keep her pride
All she had was the pain
No one understood that that she just wanted a friend
Some one to make the pain go away
A person to save her from herself

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Copyright 2005 Danielle Heyboer
Published on Wednesday, February 23, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    grrr, you know I love you girl! things are just sorta crazy right now, I'm sorry something drove you to write like this*hugs* oh, I forgot, grrrr*kicks cutter poem* BAAAAD Danielle...;) Scholar

  • Forgotten Angel On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    great write...truly great..i can relate to bout every line..and it all comes down to...well..alot of things..great write! -Kel

  • A former member wrote: Good write... It reflects the way I felt/feel EXACTLY... keep it up...

  • Sex Slave On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Sex Slave (78)By person wrote:

    thanx-Danny

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    wow..short yet powerful...this is AWESOME

  • happilydepressed On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, happilydepressed (409)By person wrote:

    awesome write

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