The Succubus

By happilydepressed

Her love carves a smile into my heart
As the blood slowly drips the pleasurable pain starts
Her nails dig and tear at my eyes
Her laughter silences my cries
She cuts me with her blade
The lights dim and slowly fade
Lying in a puddle of blood face down
On my head I wear a thorn crown
My hands and feet in shackles and chains
A bed of nails rests on my back each point injects pain
Blood soaked jeans and a blood stained shirt
She's standing over me wearing a leather studded breastplate and torn black mini skirt
Her wings spread and she smiles to let her knife like teeth show
Her eyes turn red and glow
She's getting off as I suffer
She closes her eyes and breathes in deep breaths of pleasure
She shows no mercy, no sympathy
But she has my empathy
I understand her pleasure of power
How she feels as I cower
The way she intimidates her victim
Her love is so sweetly grim
She sticks out her serpent-forked tongue and begins to hiss
She licks my face and gives me a kiss
Forces my mouth open and bites my tongue
Climaxing as the blood begins to run
I beg and plead
But she's enjoying herself too much as I bleed
My eyes close, I died in my sleep
She sits down beside me and begins to weep
I was her one and only love
She's like a raven and I'm a dove
Now that it's over she shows remorse
This is her curse but her fate is far worst
The beautiful seductive succubus flies off into the night
Into the dark and out of sight
But she'll return
To watch my body, her love burn
She can't undo what she's done
So she leaves before the rising sun
Back into the pain and fire
That is her lustful love and twisted desire

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Copyright 2004 happilydepressed
Published on Tuesday, May 17, 2022.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

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  • monalisamarie On Saturday, March 25, 2006, monalisamarie (113)By person wrote:

    i like how you ended it. great piece

  • A former member wrote: wonderful work yet so deep and true. i love it! you have great talent! wonderful!

  • Serenity On Friday, April 8, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    OH SO BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT. Lol. You're so awesome. I love your work

  • happilydepressed On Friday, April 8, 2005, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    thanks temptress

  • A former member wrote: I absolutely love this poem. You have a great amount of talent. - Holly

  • A former member wrote: so your the poor soul i done that to!!...lol, this is remarkable and very off the most trodden path. i adore this poem...it's a fave now. lindsay

  • happilydepressed On Friday, December 3, 2004, happilydepressed (400)By person wrote:

    Thank you

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