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My Minds' Own Jail
By darkness_descends
Trapped in my minds' own jail,
A life sentence with no parole and no bail.
In a cell filled with confusion and pain,
All topped off with delusions and disdain.
I am my only cell mate,
Shackled and tortured by hate.
Thinking in my solitude,
Has corroded my mind and my attitude.
Viewing my world with cynicism,
I have adopted solipsisim.
No god could possibly exist,
In a world such as this.
Everyday I try to escape,
But this has become my fate.
Still I try everyday and miserably fail,
Never resigning to the sentence of...
MY MINDS OWN JAIL!
(comments are greatly appreciated)
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Published on Saturday, November 25, 2000.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "My Minds' Own Jail"
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A former member wrote:
I feel like that quite often and its nice that I've found a poet who can write about things I can really relate too. Touching and Intense Quite impressive!!!!!!!
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, sIo
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wrote:
this is quite intimidating and nerve racking. the description is tasteful and perfect.
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A former member wrote:
I agree you must NEVER stop writing. ~cold~
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A former member wrote:
Man you are an awesome poet. I really admire you for it. Never ever stop writing!!!
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A former member wrote:
wow, you never stop purging out the wonderful poetry do you
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2003, cre
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I *really* like this one. Another great write.
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On Friday, June 6, 2003, Crying_Banshee
(62) wrote:
i really like your works...
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