"Two Way Mirror"

By happilydepressed

There’s a cold dark stare being cast into my direction
I see your face in my reflection
You’re standing on the other side of the mirror
So far yet so near
You look into my eyes
My face is your disguise
My death is your demise
Your life ends when mine dies
You reach out to my face
But you’re in a different place
In my reflection you hide
Looking through from the other side
I can feel your stare
Looking in on me through a two way mirror
I shatter the mirror and walk through
I left my side to be with you
Behind me I left a hole
But now at least myself is whole

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Copyright 2004 happilydepressed
Published on Tuesday, November 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: oh i like. going to read some more.

  • Sticky Kitty On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    nice rhyme ~*Kitty*~

  • A former member wrote: great write

  • island warrior On Thursday, December 9, 2004, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    A very enjoyable read.

  • happilydepressed On Thursday, December 9, 2004, happilydepressed (409)By person wrote:

    thanks

  • DarkDruidess On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    nice write...I love the concept too.

  • A former member wrote: I really like the concept of this poem, getting to the other side of the mirror is something I've allways dreamt of doing

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