A Collector Of B/ro\\ke/n Words
By BeautifulCalamity
Perhaps the true artist was born free of intention and motive,
and fate truly could never have been...
Your fingertips were meant for tracing circles around my lips,
Could this ever be your poetry?
I want to be your muse,
and
I want to be your only
...
Your voice was meant to keep me awake in it's shrill
tone.. in it's sad sound,
Could this now be your song?
As you slam your torn hands on the rusted,
wine-pictured strings of your guitar
...
..
I cant help but watch and know,
You
are
Mine
[No You're Not]
Your form was meant to bend towards my own,
As we sleep at the bottom of the ocean
.Motionless.
Am I Your Proud Sculpture?
Standing without limbs.
My iris almost completely rid of black,
at the constant attention of the overbearing
sun.
Colors sink together in the doubtful flickering of
cigarettes
...
..
(Will this scene be forever recorded by the scratches of your paintbrush?)
Shoot Me______
_____And Let My Blood Be Your Ink
_____________
..I'll wish on you forever..
Melt my prayers,
and turn the twilight around
so that it may know my face..
So that it may know my face.......
.....
I am no artist,
I know nothing of brilliance or moon stone gifts of odyssey and explosions..
I can only write in the memory of today,
and hope for tomorrow.
I am no one,
but myself
Comments on "A Collector Of B/ro\\ke/n Words"
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On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, Circe Avalon
(115) wrote:
very good very artsy!
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
you are an artist. you are a poet. you are beautiful in your desperation. ~lauren~
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On Thursday, August 4, 2005, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
that first line really hooked me...i am forever haunted by what a true artist is, and why they feel the way they do, why the passion runs so deep in their blood. you have not given me any awnser...merely something to think about. thank you. ~lauren~
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A former member wrote:
"..I'll wish on you forever.." Beautiful!
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
i'm very much entertained at the thought of you enjoying my work, you humble me...chyu! (the japanese sound for a kiss)
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
i..i..i won't read anything else tonite, this is on my favs list and so are you!
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On Friday, December 3, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
This is so beautiful Calamity, I can't tell you how many times I've read this now...so beautiful! words can't express. Blessed be,always. ~b
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A former member wrote:
"shoot me and let my blood be your ink" god damn your so amazing!! i love reading your work each time it shocks me. amazing job!!
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A former member wrote:
WOW!!
This is great!
I'm much impressed
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A former member wrote:
The honest sense of artist, ur words my lady are just gorgeous as u,broken words of u make up my day..thanks..Imad
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On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
stunning...sorry for the lack of comment, but that's all I could think of.
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A former member wrote:
Very, very beautiful. The title seemed alluring somehow and the poem was even more so . . the slamming of torn hands . . lovers sleeping in the ocean. . it is all just so divine. Wonderfully written and a gratifying read ~ Rose
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On Monday, November 22, 2004, addicted_angel
(21) wrote:
thought this was beautiful, addicted
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On Monday, November 22, 2004, Grey Lies
(185) wrote:
wonderful...i just love it for some reason...