The Brand You've Etched Into Your Back
By BeautifulCalamity
(Red Lips) Bled Onto Your Cheek,
I wish my words could bring a shiver upon you..
and pierce your imagination till never.
Brand you, Mark You..
as my own
...
Roses.. melted into shades
of self doubt and rising suns.
Roses.. to brighten up the burnt out
stars that build cities in your face.
Ash, so perfectly placed..
and now you resemble a saint.
..Roses..
the beautiful shame I
never wanted to find myself writing about today
Flowers.. to rise up from
the heroin soil and wink out of spite.
Now you know, you were always so beautiful..
far too beautiful,
and I cannot keep you from seeing that
..anymore..
Flowers.. life-like webs of
foolish desires and
the clutching hands that
hold on to N O T H I N G
the Ignorance lies in the fact that I was never
blind,
and I always knew it would come to this.
.S A Y.
your wicked laugh
and twisted memoirs
of bones scattered
throughout the ruins
of your bittersweet soul
.Y O U.
drop me as
blue-powdered
spines,
like the edges of
children's tongues as
they place their thought
on rhymes and tales of
princesses rotting
and princes helpless
.W I L L.
Roses, like intentional victims
that leap out of
self-inflicted wounds..
Longing for something more,
but born of something less..
Sunshine, Love Lies
..
Rub the black from your eyes ,
and with that discover
that you have rubbed me away
and I will not be back..
Let it fill your life,
I hope you're consumed.
Oh say, You'll Say
.S T A Y.
Awards
Comments on "The Brand You've Etched Into Your Back"
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On Tuesday, August 15, 2017, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Wow... so eloquent. Such beautiful wording. I wish I could write like that. If it doesn't rhyme I can't write it. A truly enjoyable read. JD
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A former member wrote:
Truly inspirational. Almost too good.
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On Friday, November 26, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
ohh, that's poetry friends...this shines. "Roses, like intentional victims.." i think that whole stanza can stand on it's own. ~~snoopy dance~~
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
This really is too beautiful clam.. deeper and deeper with every stanza.. I especially love the first one.. incredibly beautiful.
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On Thursday, November 11, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
aww, thanks rose.. i can say your words have the same effect on me..
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A former member wrote:
You're just wonderful. ~ Rose.
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A former member wrote:
-imagery is exceptional. Truly, I can't express enough how much I have fallen in love with this. "Roses, like intentional victims that leap out of
self-inflicted wounds.." . this is like being in a whirlwind. You have pulled me from the past. *curtseys*
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A former member wrote:
"Roses.. melted into shades
of self doubt and rising suns. Roses.. to brighten up the burnt out stars that build cities in your face. Ash, so perfectly placed and now you resemble a saint". Your words will be the end of me . . how stunning this is. The
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
aww, thanks lyn and everyone for the lovely things you had to say.. :*
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
I'm truly stunned right now.. Feel like my mind's just kind of melted.. this is incredible.. you seem to get more and more powerful with every post.. you're writing is wonderful, and pure. I adore it.
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
*sigh*, your stuff just dosnet stop moving me! lol! :):):)
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A former member wrote:
stunning visuals and beautifully worded
wow
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
damn calamity this is amazing it really is and its going on my faves