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Scorned...{Stale Seduction}
By A Velvet Tongue
I can feel it coming
a knock on the door
shattered knuckles
splintered flesh
I can see opinion
stale seduction
creamed conformity
apocalypse new
I can hear abandon
falsetto reincarnate
sideswiped symphonies
dramamine dreams
I can earn repetiton
feminine deformity
mundane morosity
tasteful toxins
I can touch fantasy
severed chakras
exquisite eccentrities
ramrod rust
I know what you want
another blow ..upon that rotten flute
10 beats til deep throat
split and choked
another harrowing nerve end
blissful and bewitched
til the eruption....executes...
another vow of silence...
another notch of fate
another shot at remorse
another executioner's hood
another secret...rooted..vined and recoiled..
give...
...give in
give out....
.....give over
give....up...
...give away
give me....
another choice
another voice
another vile
another trial
another yin
another yang
another grab
another bag
another date
with fate..
another reason to hate....
......... you..
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Copyright 2004 A Velvet Tongue
Published on Thursday, November 4, 2004.
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On Monday, December 31, 2012, Stephanie Sideways
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wrote:
A painful topic. The hate and distain rings throughout! This was so well done!
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A former member wrote:
Velvet Tounge, wow I've been a huge fan for a LONG time.. I was woundering if I could use a few of your poems a song lyrics for my band... we're just local... email me at Soreheartt@yahoo.com... please...
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
powerful, biting write, excellently done.
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
the meter in this charges the whole piece with a nastiness which is throughly addictive. Great stuff.
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
I love this....amazing...i like how you ended it ^-^~ss
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A former member wrote:
This made me a painful bitter, as opposed to a painful remorseful. Lovely piece.
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