Whats Underneath my Mask

By Sex Slave

I hide what is too hard to see

Seek shelter from the hate

I hide myself underneath a mask

Too scared to tell my secrets

Unable to show the pain

The scars I will hide

But the pain that will soon kill me

Will end all my suffering

And make the nightmares disappear

Rip away the mask and you will only find lies

But if you kill me you will only set me free.

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Published on Thursday, October 28, 2004. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Whats Underneath my Mask"

A former member wrote: wonderfull poem
On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, mywristshurt (405) wrote:

beautiful... amazing./.. now i know why i marked you as a fav.
On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182) wrote:

I agree with Lyneas and Kya. cant think of anything betterto say.
On Friday, October 29, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

To live a lie is to live in hell, no?well written Danielle Kya
On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

I like what you put a across here.. living a lie, lying so much to your that it becomes deep rooted, you lose the truth.. very good work, I wish I could haven written with this kind of fluency and emotional intelligence when I was your age.
On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

have*
On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

And also, the last line really was quite brilliant.
On Thursday, October 28, 2004, stormtalk (727) wrote:

If it's too hard to see, then why are you hiding it? Are you a lie, then?
On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Zhee (529) wrote:

i really liked the way you ended this.. very nicely done...
On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Sex Slave (78) wrote:

thanx
A former member wrote: The last line...was absolutely wonderful.