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Lost in the Sky
By sweetambrosia
Eyes flutter
black lashes
upon cheeks
rosy pink
from sleep
open
close
open
Blue eyes
hypnotizing
so rich
engulfing me
entranced
pulling me in
drowning in a
sea of blue
black
seeing stars
skating on the rings
of Saturn
smiling at the moon
who turns his back on me
to glare at me
blindingly
seeing
black spots
black holes
sucking me in
swimming
in the
milky way
crashing through
the atmosphere
riding the comets
tail
the fireworks
explode within
my
head
and I am staring
up at the sky
ever upward
falling
flying
found
lost
in the sky
your
eyes.
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Copyright 2004 Amber N. S. Hill
Published on Thursday, May 6, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Angst Queen
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wrote:
i'm lucky i didn't fall out of my seat on this one. i have images flashing through my mind that i've never seen before
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On Monday, July 5, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
absolutely brilliant poem,i love the imagery that second verse floored me.and then the last line give it yet more weight,jsut an excellent ride/write
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On Thursday, May 6, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
This is beautiful. I loved how you explained everything so well, the last lines surprised me it was so lovely, I loved all the imagery used. Wow... ~Kirsten~
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On Thursday, May 6, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
This was gorgeous, the array of colours shone vividly through a perfect flow of words. I love "skating on the rings of Saturn" I love the whole piece, beautiful. ~L
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On Thursday, May 6, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
that was my favourite line too; and this is indeed a very beautiful piece... lovely write. :)
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