R.C.

By Crystal Passion

Puppet
What are you doing
With your strings tangled
Can’t you do anything for yourself
And look at your rags
So torn and faded
Why must I do everything
Ill give you a new set of chords
And in return you will dance
Ill make you a new suit of velvet
And wear it you will for only me
And so as my will bends
So will your back
Just before your bones
Start to break
And as my words cut through
Will you bleed
For me
Because
I am your master

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Copyright 2004 Crystal Passion
Published on Sunday, April 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • _Andrew_ On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    the ending is old skool metallicaish >:D, but yea kryzu. this was good, but i know you've done 10xx betta. Lotsa Love, your drewby

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, April 29, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...is this really...? is this how you feel it was like...? jeez, I feel for you, and I want you to know I'm always here for you, just like you were for me...anytime you need something, just yell... -Darun Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, April 29, 2004, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    *hugs x infinity*...because I can... Scholar

  • Lynaes On Monday, April 26, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Oh wow this was haunting, scary and empowering, sent a shiver down my spine! Nice work I loved it. -L

  • WinterGrave On Monday, April 26, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    this was quite a read, nice to read your work agian.~~~Grave

  • murder_in_clubland On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    . . . ~ss

  • murder_in_clubland On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    oh a poem.. i really like it...~ss

  • murder_in_clubland On Sunday, April 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    lol i was stupid enought o read it when it was blank but i came back to check and "poof!" a poem! yay! its really good... btw yew luky girl ;) i read that poem bout u and sixie ;)~ss

  • Anth On Saturday, May 1, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    its one of those thoughts that many people have thought before, but only you could create such a perfect poem from it,..superb

  • Crystal Passion On Saturday, May 8, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    why thank you, i appreciate the comment

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