Just Behind the Sun (Blackened Shades of Grey)

By Mistress Morbid

A butterfly flaps
irregular beats
drunken off of pollen
its wings torn
halfway off its body

Flutters rapidly
as fast as it can
in hopes the giant
will not grab it
and rip the rest
of its wings off

Staggering to stay
afloat the gusting wind
and far away enough
from the giggling giant

For the butterfly
has no where to hide
slowly drifting lower and lower
the butterfly glides into
water and is suddenly submerged
into the shiny depths
of a swiftly running lake

Sadly enough
the little child that
had torn the poor
butterfly's wings off
followed and fell into
the water as well

only to see that child
doesn't know how to swim

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Copyright 2004 Morbid Derangement
Published on Wednesday, April 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Solace On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Karma...

  • OLd SouL On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    Very ironic.

  • manywalks On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Slid into my stomach and balled there. Painful reality. Beautifully sculpted. ~ mw

  • Six-Out On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Ironic. Both now gone, such a sad state it is.

  • Lynaes On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Such a sad and tragic story, but heart wrenchingly beautiful, I could see it play out in my mind's eye. This sent shivers down my spine! Amazing write Morb I absolutely love it! -L

  • purr_verse On Thursday, April 15, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    i agree completely... this was absolutely visual... the butterfly's desperate attempt at escape was so movingly written... great work.

  • DoctorAsh On Thursday, April 15, 2004, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    hmmm, this is very interesting .. i love your idea here, the perception behind the story. good write, awsome title. [D&A]

  • murder_in_clubland On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    it gave me the shivers ~slave

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