Just Now..Like This...

By A Velvet Tongue

It's hard to feel
just now..like this
thoughts scatter
dreams shatter
you..flatter
as my breath quickens..

I protest
you steal a kiss
never miss
beckon a hisssssss
this iron fist
flattens your heart


Now I hate
beckoned fate
sweet distaste
radiates
permiate to satiate
how my hunger swells

Soon this rush
calls a blush
libido's flush
ride a hush
lips to crush
dancing in your lust

Do I dare
pull your hair
bodies ...bare
passion's flare
this...so...rare
take me now like this..


Soon to neglect
as we connect
desires...defect
intentions...inspect
lack of respect
just a passing whim?

Hips roll and burn
taking turns
savage yearn
lessons to learn
another
...return


Just now...
......Like This..

Take me...


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Copyright 2004 Beverly L. Hernandez
Published on Friday, March 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: The raw search of passion in one another...summed up perfectly.

  • urbanhumility On Friday, April 9, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    beautiful, your essence of passion and learned prose do you so well here......so very well done.......urban

  • flying_fox On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    pure seduction as always...*takes this to bed*. Fox

  • OLd SouL On Sunday, April 4, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I like the push/pull affect of this. Of course, your writing I love... though the feeling here conveyed.. I despise. :::OLd

  • A former member wrote: *jumps you* ok if you say so.

  • Alanarchy On Friday, March 26, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    "I protest you steal a kiss" This was great vel. It's been WAY to long.

  • Anth On Monday, April 5, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    brilliant, love the way you write, the hiss line was cool, in anais nin,s words "i search for the marvellous" and i scroll down the page to find it

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