A Cry For Help..

By Anybody_Killette


The sound of tears
break the silent night
She couldn't take it anymore
she gave up the fight
Her spirit is broken
her eyes tell you why
it's been broken for years
from living a lie

A lie she seldom told
but everyone knew
they'd whisper and point
she was liked by very few

the sound of tears
a piercing sound
She couldn't take it anymore
all this shoving around
Her spirit is broken
it needs to be free
It's been broken for years
and always will be

A sky painted black
with gleaming white eyes
her skin painted red
revealing her disguise

The sound of tears
a sound so true
She couldn't take it anymore
it was long past due
Her spirit is broken
and so is her heart
It's been broken for years
she's falling apart

Someone help her
set her free
Mend these broken things
that are inside of me

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Copyright 2004 Anybody_Killette
Published on Sunday, March 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: So mournful... So tramatic in it's emotion... I love it... Write on.

  • mywristshurt On Monday, June 12, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    im still crying.. this is like the best piece i think ive read in months.. it just tares me apart to know exactly, word for word, how this feels.. amazing and devistaingly meloncholy write.. i still love it

  • mywristshurt On Saturday, April 29, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    *cries for you* i know what you mean.. im putting this in my favs.

  • A former member wrote: i'm broken and bleeding and your poetry makes me feel not so alone. you truly have a talent for words and you see whats behind and under all the b/s. keep writing

  • PointlessX On Monday, March 22, 2004, PointlessX (36)By person wrote:

    "..Her spirit is broken, it needs to be free. It's been broken for years and always will be.."--Holy crap, this poem ROX!! extreme props to you--PointlessX

  • TornPaperDoll On Monday, March 22, 2004, TornPaperDoll (63)By person wrote:

    "Her spirit is broken"

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