Too Much..

By Anybody_Killette

The pain,
has become too much
too much,
for me to embrace.

My heart,
is beginning to weaken
to weaken,
at a steady pace.

The blood,
flows from my wrists
my wrists,
in a most beautiful way.

My razor,
lying there gleaming,
gleaming,
with such dismay.

The warmth,
such a feeling
a feeling,
so different and sweet.

My smile,
continuosly growing
growing,
welcoming the defeat.

The death,
is reaching for me
and I'm,
stretching as far as I can.

My body,
trying to go to the light
the light,
is becoming wan.

The tears,
begin to flow
to flow,
from being so lonely.

My love,
I thought it was death
death,
my one and only.

The hate,
begins to return
return,
from within the stars.

My eyes,
looking down
down,
upon those scars.

The scars,
cleansed with my blood
my blood,
all over the floor.

My hand,
descending outward
toward,
an imaginary door.

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Copyright 2004 Anybody_Killette
Published on Thursday, March 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: No wonder this got poem of the day! It's a masterpiece, the rhyme scheme is so original!

  • TornPaperDoll On Saturday, March 6, 2004, TornPaperDoll (63)By person wrote:

    wow, i like this a lot, very nice flow.TPD

  • OLd SouL On Friday, March 5, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    If I've read this once, I've read it a million times... all cutter poems seem the same to me. Right now I'm in the mood for metal in the mouth.. brains on the wall..that sort of thing. *sighs* Stupid little blade. :::OLd

  • OLd SouL On Friday, March 5, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    oh one more thing.. HAIL NEMO! :)

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