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Nevermore
By Mindless fairy
Push the blade up to her throat
The blood from her arms drips down your coat
* Stain *
Now every one knows
You can snap too
Instead of slowly being broken
You might not die
Watch as my lungs fill with blood
Oh look! I'm choking!
But not on my fluids
The hatred in your eyes
It's constricting my breathing patterns...
Killing me slowly
As you watch...
I slowly painfully die
As you watch the tears flow from my eyes
You stop
* Everything is still now *
You start to think
* Clink *
The blade falls from your hand
Onto cold ground
The love you lost from my eyes
You looked,
You finally found
* *Too late* *
Her body lays lifeless
On the freezing cold floor
Never back to bother you ,
Love you or hate you...
Nothing from her...
She is finally...
***NEVERMORE***
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Copyright 2004 Mindless fairy
Published on Wednesday, January 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Nevermore"
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A former member wrote:
reading this was kinda like watching someone narrorate a dream. you really created a descriptive scene w/ this poem and left the readers to act it out in their head. -samone
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Alanarchy
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wrote:
Very vivid. I really enjoyed this. Kind of twisted. Still highly enjoyable.
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Oh that was great! So descriptive and vivid! I loved every moment :)
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
WOW! This was good, kinda freaky though... but good
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