Pain Whore
By Zahgurim
Prostitute
Coming from the institute
Where constant, casual sodomy
Carries it's own irony
Isn't it lovely
When brick walls crumble
You finally reach the top...
Suddenly
You stumble
Over
And upon your own waste
Now you must make haste
Your biggest customer awaits
Hey big boy
You like what you see
Fuck no!
Get it away from me!!
Pill pusher
Numb filler
It may help
But it won't kill her
Drug fiend
Alleys unseen
Tempted by confusion
I deficate what I mean
High priced hooker
I don't want your business anymore
Why is it
When I kick you to the floor
You always come back
Begging for more
S&M whore
Without your mask
Your just a bore
A complete blur
The uncontrollable shakes that stir
Pill popper
Heart stopper
It never helped
It just cock blocked her
Shadowed fiend
Alleys foreseen
Comfort in confusion
I still shit what I mean
Suck it up
And push.
Comments on "Pain Whore"
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A former member wrote:
Holy fuck weed eater orange crack babies! That was awesome!
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A former member wrote:
holy shit the rythm and flow and just this poem holy shit
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On Monday, December 27, 2004, AHHH
(184) wrote:
sweeeeet. awesome write.
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A former member wrote:
you sound like you write from both maturity and intelligence, you really seem to know what going on in the world.
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Mischevious Princess
(28) wrote:
I like this poem..... good work
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A former member wrote:
Now take this poem and apply it to a bouncer at a rowdy club. The perfect combination. Bouncer+S&M buff=crushed party crashers.
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A former member wrote:
this is a very good write,..i hope this doesnt go out to one of ur ex's,.lol
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2003, angel_eyes
(10) wrote:
i love this poem!! its my favorite!
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On Thursday, May 29, 2003, Rachel
(210) wrote:
Lol, only you.. :D Nice one.
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
damn....i wish i could write like this
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On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, ColdScaredAlone
(77) wrote:
""Isn't it lovely When brick walls crumble You finally reach the top... Suddenly You stumble Over"" THAT was brilliant...
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On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Vivid...very vivid. I wonder some times...smokey and welted...makes me think of these things...nice work. ~DW~
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A former member wrote:
damn.....that was awsome. very, very impressed.