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Our Daily Portrait
By Crystal Passion
A broken heart-
Banished as kindling
A sedated soul-
Exiled to loneliness
Baring the wounds of a relentless battle
Which daily fought to tear me down
Your immortal wall, built by your own heart
Destined to lock itself away from mine
A myriad of pain to torment the lonely
When you choose to close off
The pleasures of tomorrow, lost in yesterday
If only… you could only… let me in
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Copyright 2004 Crystal Lee
Published on Tuesday, January 27, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
if only boys understood. just a bit...oh well theres always ways ^.^...
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer
(162)
wrote:
beautiful write, I love the ending
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A former member wrote:
i had to sigh when i read this as i am one of those boys bast mentioned. beautiful write though...beautiful.
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
i love the end- "if only...you could only... let me in"... i feel like that now... but some boys just want to keep themselves closed tight. oh well.
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On Thursday, February 19, 2004, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
pretty good write kryz. im sorry about the anguish you're going through right now and i hope that things will turn out for you.
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On Thursday, February 12, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
life is crewl, if there is a god i think "it" joys in our pian. i really like this one.~~~Grave
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On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
bittersweet, and oh so sad...I had to sit and sigh after reading this...very nice...
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On Saturday, February 7, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
very sad, yet beautifully written, great piece, as always your work is excellent, can't wait for the next one, ~Emptyness~
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A former member wrote:
"Pleasures of tomorrow lost in yesterday" Thats beautiful. I agree with Six... things'll come around. In the mean time... keep up the great works. -Doll
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On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Sometimes it's hard to open up, especially to the ones you love. Give it time, and hopefully things will be great :) I'm wishing the bestest for you and him.
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On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Daemonicus
(516) wrote:
seriously, wise words. kryz, you have some kind of a way with words, only you can do it this way.
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