Decisions

By Drayvinio

Reality hidden
Submerged in paranoia
Flaws emerge

Kills the mind
Cripples the body
Everything stripped away

Shattered and broken I lay
Hope is lost
Failure on the horizon

What's left?
Me. Only me.
Shall I give in?

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Published on Monday, January 19, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Decisions"

On Monday, February 11, 2008, lajeeves (46) wrote:

NO
On Saturday, March 5, 2005, AniDayz (812) wrote:

*keep your head above water*do not give in to 'the going under'...i love this.
On Friday, January 28, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428) wrote:

what's left? me-only me. well said, this was short yes.. but with such a deep impact and message. very much enjoyed
On Monday, January 19, 2004, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

I like short poems, this one was good!
On Monday, January 19, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Nicely done. A great write. and welcome.
On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, Drayvinio (19) wrote:

thank you for the feedback and the welcome. I have yet to write a long poem.